Fortune Cookie 25 rewrite…

Yesterday I confidently posted a retelling of the Daedalus story…and my facts were wrong. Nobody pointed it out to me, it just hit me while I was driving on one of my many errands that it was not Daedalus who fell from the sky, struck down by the gods, but Icarus, his son. In so many ways, this is more horrifying instead of less. I’m keeping the title of “Daedalus Falls”, but I rewrote it to reflect the true story.

Today’s poem will be along later. I’m working on it!

Daedalus Falls
By Michelle Garren-Flye

Divine wind, bear him ever up
above the clouds to the heavens.
Everyone’s watching, please don’t fail him!
Don’t let me down, help him soar.
Ask me not how I dare to dream, but
let him spread his wings and
unite again with me on the side of safety—
suppose you do!

Flight is all he’s ever dreamed
about but now he’s soaring high, showing
lack of restraint, defying the gods.
Love fails to hold him up, and his fall
strikes me to the ground.

National Poetry Month: Fortune Cookie Poetry 25, “No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings”

I think the beauty (for me) of each of these poems is each day I get a fortune and sit down at the computer with no idea what kind of poetry I’m going to write. (Except Sundays, which are supposed to be haiku, but I forgot about that last week…)

Today’s fortune immediately brought to mind the story of Daedalus, who tried to soar too high using wings that were his own, but not natural. So I used that as my jumping off point. Let me know if you can figure out what kind of poetry I used.

Photo and poem copyright 2024 Michelle Garren-Flye
No bird soars too high if he soars with his own wings.

Daedalus Falls
By Michelle Garren-Flye

Divine wind, bear me ever up
above the clouds to the heavens.
Everyone’s watching, I can’t fail!
Don’t let me down, help me soar.
Ask me not how I dare to dream, but
let me spread these aching wings and
unite me with the gods I long to see—
suppose you do!

Flight is all I’ve ever dreamed
about but what’s this sudden
lack of light about—the gathering clouds?
Love fails me now, devotions unheard…
so this is how it ends.

National Poetry Month: Fortune Cookie Poetry 13, “Nature, time and patience are the three great healers”

Ah, these fortune cookies.

My counselor once told me that grief isn’t linear…but it does happen. It may loop back on itself so that when you thought you’d entered the acceptance phase, you suddenly find yourself set back to the anger.

So, while I agree with my fortune cookie to an extent, I also know it’s not a super simple process.

To make the writing of this poem even tougher on myself, I decided to do it as an acrostic poem. I’ve never actually managed one of those successfully. Until now. I think it worked. I probably need to rewrite it some but it’s not bad, actually.

Hope you enjoy!

Photo and poem copyright 2024 Michelle Garren-Flye
Nature, time and patience are the three great healers

Going On
By Michelle Garren-Flye

How long must this go on—
every moment evokes
agony of loss and heartbreak;
remind me again that
time is our greatest healer

and nature will help fade the
clarity that loses its draw when
harking back to previous
eras only brings pain.

Help will come, but be patient,
endure each day knowing
authentic healing happens with
living.
Seasons pass, life does go on.