Seriously. What does make a haiku good? I know it when I read it. I know it when I write it. I’m still trying to get to the point where I feel I can do it consistently, though. Here’s an idea:
#40 (eh)
Pretty pink roses
What secrets do you keep there
Beneath your petals?
#41 (not bad)
Dragonfly swoops low
Lands on water’s smooth surface
To meet Reflection
#42 (s’okay)
Lie here beside me
Look at the clouds and dream
What do you see there?
#43 (maybe?)
It rustles the brush
Stalking the moonlit midnight
Fearful manifest
#44 (not bad)
Hard to remember
Winter in mid summer heat
Ice when all is fire
#45 (love this one, but I made it a full poem)
why would you think all
the fire in the world is yours
you are left with ash
#46 (eh)
Light shines in the rain
Love awaits us in those walls
Home sweet home again
#47 (not bad)
Smell of fresh death floats
On hot wind with crackly leaves
Fallen trees are mourned
