1:58 p.m. Late again! Gonna go back to my tried and true form of haiku, I think. See what you think:
spring cleaning unearths
past years' deserted treasures
you pause to address
still treasures or junk?
is it gold you've found hidden
or aluminum?
impossible choice
put it aside for today
pray strength tomorrow
2:05 p.m. I kind of like this. I love haiku’s little turn in the middle. It’s very like the way a sonnet has one in its last couplet. I wanted to see if I could do that with three haiku (with the last one being the turn) and still keep the turn in each one. It probably needs more work, but I have stuff to do today, so I’m going to call it.
Hope you enjoyed!
