12:26 p.m. When I can’t think of anything to write about (like today), I write haiku. So today, I’ve decided, literally just now, to write a linked haiku. What about? Well, I just wrote a short article about a ghost cat. How about that? I shall write:
Ghost Cat by the Sea Haiku
12:28
sea breeze passes by
without ruffling his fur
ghost cat waits, lonely
sandy shores are home to him
he plays with side walking crabs
at night the light spears
through the sky above the shoals
ghost cat waits, on guard
did once his feat trod the deck
as he hunted mice below?
morning visitors
spot him in the deep shadows
ghost cat purrs for them
but nights are long on the shore
as ghost cat waits for the morn
12:36 p.m. Okay. Not awful. Now a quick rewrite.
ghost cat by the sea
by michelle garren-flye
sea breeze passes by
without ruffling his fur
ghost cat waits, lonely
did once his feat trod the deck
of a ship long lost to wreck?
morning visitors
spot him in the deep shadows
ghost cat purrs for them
the nights are long on the shore
as ghost cat waits for the morn
he sees the light spear
starry sky above the shoals
ghost cat waits, on guard
one hundred years on this shore
he may play here a hundred more
12:52 p.m. There’s one extra syllable in one of the lines, but it doesn’t mess things up, so I’m leaving it. I like the flow of the poem better now. It makes more sense to start in the light and move to the darkness. I also re-wrote a couple of lines.
For anyone interested, this is inspired by the ghost cat of Hatteras lighthouse. You can google it. Also google the cats left on the ghost ship Carol A. Deering. These three cats, the only survivors of the famous ghost ship, are only tangentially linked to the ghost cat of Hatteras as it is commonly believed to have belonged to a past lighthouse keeper. However, it has been speculated he might be one of the Deering’s cats.
Maybe he’s waiting there for the captain.
